TenWords

she stores laughter
in the pink folds of her dress

**

a pair of rubberboots
leaned against a wall;
dream rain

**

a small purple car
beams boldly
ina tin/grey sea

**

the odor of a wolf
nestles warm
in your chesthair

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today we’re writing TenWords at dVerse, a form invented by the awesome Brian Miller… smiles… pub doors open at 3pm EST

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44 responses to “TenWords

  1. the last one is my fav for sure…ha….its got a couple senses going on and there is a nice intimacy….some fun ones as well…the storing of the laughter…the dreaming boots….that might make for a cool short story…

  2. Just four, heck, you make us hungry for more; wow, like others I dig the rubber boots dreaming, & what man would not want his chest hair to have the oder of the wolf? & of course, you found the sensuality within the brevity.

  3. Claudia – as I reread your delightful words, it comes to me that you have covered everything important in life! I like Brian’s 10/10 poetry form!

  4. your first one is my fav…makes me think of a little girl…maybe 4 or 5, who, while dressed up, is still a little child who loves to be silly and bring a smile to everyone she encounters.

  5. The economy of words are very well addressed in your ten words, Claudia. The form works really well for you in verse. I have enjoyed them. And hey, I hope that you still remember me after 48 years that. i’ve been away hybernating extendedly.. hehe… well, seriously, i’m glad to be able to go back blogging again & reading my friends for once. smiles.

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