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i’m lightyears/cesium/ molecules,
the distance moon to earth
a quantum field, a theory of
nanoscopic scales
&i’m the little girl that chases doves
in a medieval marketplace,
a baby, snuggled up against her mother’s breast,
i’m in the silky wrinkles
of the businessman’s blue suit&tie, his worried eyes,
the tram’s soft rattle ’round the farmer stands,
cappucchino foam &costa rican coffee blend,
i’m every cobble stone,
that whispers stories from the past,
a kingdom// knight & cracks in the old city wall,
Justizia with a scale in hand on a 15th century clock
&carmesin red townhall paint
a crinkled skyblue paperboat
at rest//put on a table in the cyro lab
of basel university
he smiles “you really see the small things”
i am atoms,
slowed /cooled down to test
then released, a heavy wind
that whips confetti in your face,
i’m broken pottery,
&pearl-white teeth
in the 5-star hotel butler’s nightblack face
the clacking of a keyboard
in a late eve empty office space
i’m in a dream
that slowly circles ’round your chest
and in my youngest daughter’s gaze
“every clock” he says “needs an oscillator”
measuring f in kilohertz
i’m that
a pendulum,
a wanderer
i’m everything //a bit
& sling a band of sunshine ’round my hips
meet Einstein on a sun dial at 0.00001 Hz
a game of chess
the globe laughs deep (&i’m in that)
moving// turning ‘round an earthy axis in a star-drenched bed
& i am thousand spreading freckles
in the lion’s smiling face
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bri has us write self-portrait poems today at dVerse.. doors open at 3pm EST….
I especially like the line ‘i’m broken pottery’ standing alone. 🙂
oh my… you are absolutely beautiful. i adore this… and those last two lines, just perfection.
I always love you poetry….this one made my memory flash to the Beatles song.
Like the rustle of the mountain breeze through the aspens leaves…
smiles…love how varied your allusions are to yourself…from science and seperation to the creases in the silk and the butlers face….the dialogue does a great job of telling too but breaking up the declarative statements….cool piece…and great rhythm to it as well….i could hear it
Wow…just wow!!
Everything exists in you… and you in everything… such a wonderful slide of images: the freckles of the lion, the blue boat, the girl chasing doves… being my favorite ones. 🙂
Hey C. You slung a lot of “things” around your waist to show me the big picture in a colorful array of detail. If I wasn’t in a restaurant for lunch I would read it aloud. Cheers!
Like the Einstein line indeed, hopefully you’ll get some crack fill for the broken pottery part of you lol
I did read this aloud, and discovered Sandburg & Whitman in it; one of your best, drenched with introspection, quantum physics, family, your smile; loved the lines
/I’m broken pottery/& pearl-white teeth/in the 5 star hotel butler’s nightblack face/
really enjoyed myself; you tore up the prompt, exploded in true poetic Nova.
Framing it with your freckles! I love it 🙂
Very good Claudia. An interesting self-appraisal. >KB
I love the list aspect, the collection of ingredients that blend so magically into Claudia. Freckles rule. 😀
You are a person I would love to know. Beautiful.
I agree with the others about wanting to read/hear this out loud – coming from you, preferably!
And yes, you are in the small things, but everything huge and universal too – and everything beautiful. And not just a bit…
you are atoms…and yet so much more! Lovely self-portrait!
I enjoyed the fast paced reading, cadence is excellent Claudia ~ I specially like the details, the girl that chases doves, atoms, pendulum, wanderer ~ Beautifully written ~
Pure pure brilliance.
Anna :o]
This is excellent Claudia, I agree we are all those things, the universe is within us and for me you captured that so well. I thought this was a fabulous approach to the task. Well done.
Geez, between you and Bri, I just don’t know how you do it! This is exquisite, Claudia. I especially love the marriage of art and science. Just stunning.
You are super sweet, Claudia! k.
You are beautiful, and multi-faceted as an heirloom diamond. You are a genius with words, metaphors,and symbolic references. This is my favorite of everything of yours I’ve read. This is amazing.
Tina @ Life is Good
Oh wow, this is just beautiful Claudia. I love the little girl chasing doves, the crinkled skyblue paper boat, the broken pottery…everything. Superbly written!
Love those last two lines . . . . and ALL that you are.
I’m utterly in awe! This is brilliant. Such a cool self-portrait! You are amazing, Claudia!
I wish I’d said that – because all of that is who you are and more, so much more! Rare, unique, brilliant, sparkling, wine bubbly, and beautiful!
You really do see the small things!
beautiful, Claudia!! i really love “i’m broken pottery”, “i’m in a dream
that slowly circles ’round your chest”…those tiny exquisite things in life.
I so love this wanderer image Claudia…a multifaceted gem glittering def more than seven hues….
and reading this i see how beautiful you are
I like the imperfections/freckles on the lion’s face
love the close, Claudia ~
Again a poem that seems to encompass it all. The line that hit home with me was ‘a thousand spreading freckles’, but I don’t know why among all these wonderful comparisons, that particular detail would stick… Beautiful work!
Wow! Thank You for capturing so wide a range of experience! I took a Quantum Leap reading it!
…. and your writing through the years as deffinately portraited your poem
“i’m every cobble stone,
that whispers stories from the past,”
I am so there with this… amazing!
This is so, so beautiful – all the breadth, diversity and depth!
Love it, love it, love it!
This is such a densely-packed portrait of immeasurable beauty. Can’t even site a favorite part because it is all my favorite parts. Lovely write.
The imagery and imagination in this poem are spectacular……loved it!
Claudia!!!! Brilliant!!! Lovely merging of science/math/life/love.
Great stuff.
You’re complex, aren’t you 🙂
a sparkling self portrait filled with your magic and shine – beautiful – K
love this one….we are stardust
delightful!
“&pearl-white teeth
in the 5-star hotel butler’s nightblack face”
Exquisite.
Yes..i too..that it is all the essence..with different form..and lovely the way you express IT..here..:)
“i’m in the silky wrinkles
of the businessman’s blue suit&tie, his worried eyes,”
These are lovely words that have come to life ……………. I love it
Thank you for the tour of the magic that is you!
Oh wow…how beautiful you are…such a wonderful gift to really see yourself in such an amazing way. I thoroughly enjoyed this self portrait of you Claudia. I can’t help but smile…just lovely!
I like how expansive you have grasped …and that you have a place…in everything. You have no boundaries and That Is Good.
Lovely.
Jane
myriad shades! and i was wondering how it would be if you could read this aloud…i almost imagined that in one breath 🙂 from the making of atoms, molecules to the paper boat and all ticking the pendulum…vivid…:)
Wondrous atomic details. Cosmic journeys in and out and through. Thank you. 🙂
i’m that
Well, yes you are! You are all that and you are a truly inspired poet. This is brilliant, Claudia.
This is simply great Claudia – I think your best in recent times.