pushing certain buttons
can be delicate, it implies
a dash of intuition some-
times which, well–
he’s Norwegian
(if you saw him you’d know why
i call him VikingMan), a sales guy,
robbed off spitting seas & buckling boat deck–
he left his camera lying
in the taxi (yes,
we got it back–), & now make
our way through end-less
floors, no wind or storm
& all potential enemies
hide silently behind thick
mahogany doors, lap-
top like a piece of swag
pressed to his chest,
he jokes “if all else fails, we push
the swedish button– yaKnow
what this means?”, i smile
with just a look & by the way
his hair sways like a flag
through corporate corridors, i
balance in white blouse and
heels across a slingering deck &
in a mix of venturelust & sea-
sickness, think “yep–
it is a shame that
no one really knows
where all the pirates went”
.
over at dVerse, Brian Miller pushes the right buttons to unbutton our poetic creativity.. see you over there at 3pm EST.. and if you ever hear an Norwegian talking about the swedish button, he’s trying to tell you to press the reset button on the computer…smiles
Thank you so much for being here this breakfast-time. 🙂
M
pushing right buttons at right time and place… then life is set 🙂
Ah, those viking men… memories! Thank you. That was a lot of fun! 🙂
“balance in white blouse and
heels across a slingering deck &
in a mix of venturelust & sea-
sickness” love that image. 😀
I agree, wonderful images both visually, and emotionally.
Great stuff, Claudia – what would we do without all manner of buttons in this crazy age? I love most things Scandinavian and I particularly love the last verse – older ‘buttons’ are vital for blouses, too! 🙂
Yes Claudia! A swashbucklingly good write!
Well, I’m Swedish and Norwegian–Hmmmmm…. Very vivid poem. It is wonderful how you deposit us in medias res. K.
I loved the modern setting mixed with the swashbuckling pirate sea-faring feel. A very clever combination of thought and, loved the description of his hair moving in waves. This whole write made me smile 🙂
Everyone has their particular ‘buttons.’ I can picture “Viking Man” and glad he got his camera back!
Love it. Killer ending!
pretty funny on the swedish button…love your descriptions…made me think Led Zeppelin…Immigrant song….and we need a few more pirates…not sure about using a reset button though, figure i would just screw it up again…smiles…
hey i am alive…smiles.
You sure pushed some buttons for sure and might make the world go boom with your reset tour, could be good could be bad, but you might make the rich people mad..haha
This was fun!..thank you.
Claudia, this is a very successful poetic summing up of going to a business meeting with a partner in pirate-ship mode! We only kid ourselves when we say that days of Robben Barons are over!
i love this especially that last line. Very fun!
Lustful tension – very nice !
I enjoyed this little slice of life between an affectionate couple. Lovely.
Oh for the life on your kind of ocean waves 🙂
Full of adventure and dangerof a kind….
Ha! I can just see you ablancing across that “slingering” deck! Awesome word!
goood golly now! My typeslexia is getting worse by the day! “balancing”
Just had to comment…typeslexia love that! I suffer from it also.
Hmmm… gotta look up that swedish button thang. Never know when I might need it, whatever it be. It sounds fun, hanging with you on a business meeting, sailing seas in search of loot (yes, I stopped myself from using the other word). Always, always in your poem, there’s a teetering sense of reality lurking somewhere around the corner, or is it dream that might reset our entire understanding of what reality is, even in the crazy world of bizzyness.
As I read the last lines…I had to chuckle out loud…indeed…if only they would raise the skull and crossbones. 😉
Pirates in corporate corridors…not so unrealistic. The piracy overlay on the business meeting is genius.
I agree with Sondra…pirates have a more updated look and have gotten their land legs under them…
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It’s adventure on the high seas, a corporate playground where the pirates have disappeared…thank goodness for that reset button…I want to find the pirates!
potential enemies behind mahogany doors. i better be careful around those doors!!
I enjoyed this a lot!
There’s something a little saucy in there from what I can tell, as always an entertaining and evocative read Claudia x
I adore your point of view, charming and entertaining!
‘venturelust’ – what an evocative word – love your piratical poem today 🙂
You mean what we Swedes call the Norwegian button?? (Just joking–no idea if that’s true, as I’m strictly an american sort of swede.) This was great fun, Claudia, and you made the man very real and attractive–but then I’m partial to Vikings.
A Viking Man, huh? Sounds intriguing. Wonderful, as always, Claudia. A true pleasure.
Swedish buttons, Norwegian ones or American.This can start a conversation piece I’m sure. Great write Claudia!
Hank
I like the image of his hair swaying like a flag ~ push the buttons and fly where the pirates hide ~
Wunderschön! I especially loved the two last stanzas, with you, seasick on your high heels, and him, “his hair sway[ing] like a flag / through corporate corridors”! Written with humour and wit. Bravo!
this is downright sexy, Claudia!
I enjoy how the journey unfolds…much like a slow unbutton. ~ Rose
Enjoyed this Claudia, I like how poetry can make everyday life a journey with a pirate haha!
Brilliant the whole piece sewed me to the page
The hair swinging like a flag…great image…reeking of Gucci Guilty, I bet:)
Wonderful imagery. Thank you.
Super. Clever. Fun. Unique as always. Thanks.
Your portrayal of Viking decedent in business setting is fun and does what poetry does- shakes up our perspective so we see freshly. Thanks!
Quite funny. I’ve never heard of swedish button expression; I guess because I don’t know any Norwegian. Cool tale. 😀
I really enjoyed reading this and I have a favourite part already:-
“& all potential enemies
hide silently behind thick
mahogany doors, lap-
top like a piece of swag
pressed to his chest,
he jokes “if all else fails, we push
the swedish button”
Love this VikingMan poem! esp the heels across a slingering deck and the juxtaposition of wanderlust and sea-sickness! Carol
Oh still my half Norwegian heart! Yumm
You really know how to pen a picture
“robbed off spitting seas and buckling boat deck”
“hair sways like a flag through corporate corridors ”
“balance in a white blouse and heels.. ”
Great poem!!
I like the Viking sailor transplanted to a business setting in all his specifity.
All gone to mercantile halls – still buccaneers though by the sound of it. Love your use of mariner terms through the run and ride through a businessman’s sea — very clever and deftly penned!
Buttons, buttons, ugh hahaa everyone’s is different. Mine is bad grammar and not being able to spot what others see in places of esteem! Great write C, nice to see you going from strength to strength my friend.
‘slingering’ … such a great word for your kind of buccaneering 🙂 Love the mix of corporate strait-jacket and piratical adventuring..
ah the Swedish button – i’m afraid i push that rather a lot… 😉 – enjoyed this very much
well, i’m not a pirate, but i am a caveman, does that count?
very clever claudia, you created a lot of sexual tension and maintain it all the way thru… a lot of really great lines, and as always, your voice is strong in this.
I loved the last stanza of this, Claudia–I always had that feeling when dressed for a business meeting and never described it so well! I’m so glad those days appear to be over… knock on the wooden gangplank…
Fun where buttons took you with this. Where did all those pirates go?
LOVE that last line girl. love it.
What a fun take on that prompt!
Yeah, one should be aware of which button to push when…;)
“in a mix of venturelust & sea-
sickness, think “yep–
it is a shame that
no one really knows
where all the pirates went”
Hold on to your youth and wisdom too
if you ever attempt time travel.”
LOVE this.
A cool write, Claudia. “balance in white blouse and
heels across a slingering deck &
in a mix of venturelust & sea-
sickness” love that image !
Swashbuckling, me lass!!! I can hear your voice reading this, and your eyes rolling with passion like the ocean on the swells of your wild words.
off to don a puffy-sleeved shirt and some heels now…
xo
“maybe You can tell me–
balance in white blouse and
heels across a slingering deck &
in a mix of venturelust & sea-
sickness, think “yep–
it is a shame that
no one really knows
where all the pirates went”
Buttons, Venturelust, Vikingman, and the Sea…What a combination…Claudia, Tks, for sharing your very poetic words…once again!
deedee 😉
This was a fun read! Thanks for the journey.
You let me know that there is a story in everything! I love that!