“i just think this is a little weird”, i say,
“no one really knows where they’re produced”
(i have my thoughts though) &
we ship them– (out of China maybe),
Germany, CH and send them to Japan, & by the way,
that’s where the little notebooks come from
with the almost-english quotes, charming
and uNEdited, you ship me some,
& i’ll spin verse, limpid, fragile wordFalls,
centerweigh the globe, lightweight, lying
on a meadow among daisies & a herd of
brindled cows (i like those best, don’t take it personal),
they never think of traveling anywhere,
as the sun goes down, i– (can you smell
the night?), tell ‘em, that in India
they’re holy, & back home,
i take my daughter’s globe,
(plug it in & it illUmiNates), the world shines
in your face like a floodlight & my colleague says
“the best time for Vietnam is after
Chinese New Year– you should backpack,
though not in the south, getting around is easy,
white sand beaches—i’m dreaming,
and leave greasy fingerprints
on the Indian Ocean, “really, i’m emotionless”, i say,
“what happens if they break? do we send ‘em
back to Germany, to China, then return– >
Germany, CH, Japan again–?”
“haha, i see, you’re So
emotionless–” i pout my lips “i am”
i say, “oh heck, i am”– and he just smiles
.
ok, i had a bit fun with this…smiles.. sparked by a conversation at my workplace about the way of goods in our globalized world…and if you wanna know a little more about the japanese notebooks, you should read David Allen’s last week’s OLN…linking up with dVerse OpenLinkNight where we fling poetry all across the globe without border control and shipping restrictions…see you at 3pm EST..
hey Claudia
great geo-graphics and the structure and the dialogue
are both sparky and fresh which keeps its momentum through
to the end . . . with some really cute angles and degrees of
latitude –
i had a great time in the reading
Hi! Claudia…
First?…
“i take my daughter’s globe,
(plug it in & it illUmiNates), the world shines
in your face like a floodlight & my colleague says
“the best time for Vietnam is after
Chinese New Year– you should backpack…”
Hi! Claudia…
Once again, through your poetic words… you have shared a moment and your feelings and [opinion] about:[on] a world that shrinks & we’re not growing with it…
Thanks,
deedee
Ah…my dear friend you must contact the call center on the warranty to determine where to send it..which may be in the Arctic…but fear not…’your call will be answered in the order received’…just love how you poems set my mind in motion..another fine verse.
Claudia, this are Brian’s words ["dang it…not first….AAARRRRGGHHHH!"]and my exact sentiment…If you check your spam-catcher… Ha!ha!
Oops! I meant to type [these are Brian's words...]
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Invariably it’s of Chinese origin, manufactured under licence, meant for the rest of the world, and a lot cheaper too! Nicely Claudia!
Hank
smiles…it is a small world and getting smaller every day in regard to how we get things here and there….can you smell the night….i like that….smell is evocative…the lighted globe….cool touch and a playful close…nice piece…
Ha, it is a small world..globalization has pluses and minuses for sure…..so much made elsewhere! Interestingly, I used to be able to buy German souvenirs in Germany at a reasonable price. Now, not so much…LOL. I found most ‘reasonable priced’ pseudo-German souvenirs were made in China last time. I didn’t bother to buy. Why??? We have Chinese made things here. LOL. So glad I bought some GERMAN beer steins in the ‘old days.’
This was fun…and I LOVE the title. I can see that globe along with fingerprints…and can but imagine the conversation that was its muse…awesome piece!
Yeah it sure has shrunk, no need to even think about where things come from any more, although perhaps we should.
I like the idea of words travelling and going place, illuminating and leaving greasy fingerprints ~ Best to travel is pack packing and biking around the old cities ~
Happy Tuesday ~
Fun. I feel like I travelled the world, while it shrinks. I like the globe that illuminates, and did go and read about the Japanese notebooks. This was a treat.
Very charming – and hard to be emotionless about anything having to do with globes – so crazy–something made in china coming to Germany as a guide back to Vietnam – I love the brindled cows and the light, and what DO we do when it breaks? k.
Brilliant write Claudia. I love the way you intersperse Capitals at certain points. Certainly grabs the attention and makes one read with closer attention. Great job!
Delightful. Loved it. You have a great way of bringing this reader into where you are.
A fun piece…good you gave your daughter the globe for Christmas
and I love … leave greasy fingerprints
on the Indian Ocean
Leaving greasy fingerprints and wordfall, love this trip around the trade routes, claudia
I never tire of your love of travel, of poetry, of mankind, of family; nice piece, Claudia; love the line /I’ll spin verse, limpid, fragile wordfalls/ and yes, our globe shrinks daily. Our technology, internet, social networking, commerce, satellites; all play their part–but in the final analysis, the condensation is positive, for every leaf that falls in Tibet, every bullet fired in Syria, every lover’s kiss in Bremen, every dance along the Seine, every caribou castrated in Lapland, and we know about it seconds later, find ourselves more completely connected; and that could be, should be hopeful.
Now I can easily envision you looking at that globe for your next landing place, Claudia…
There is so much in the world now to appreciate. Your piece made me thing of a little note, written in beautiful calligraphy, sent to a friend from some far away place.
I think people get blinkered as they get older and refuse to accept that evolving in life. That’s what makes us old, our attitude
Inspiring write C
very cool modern style – fun authentic conversation
Great play and view on how goods move around the world these days. Isn’t it amazing?
I like very much how you position this matter, in this conversation. Well written. Loved it.
I can always see it, smell it, hear it when I read your poems… and this one made me smile.
working with exchange students reminds me that sometimes the world is small, but others its expanse is unending
Sometimes I see Barbadian things that are for tourists made in other countries… lol all I can do is smile… lol great piece
I enjoyed this fun interchange! Glad you had some fun and let us in on it…my favorite is the third stanza, I think…
ANd so we have to be here and there at the same time, but hung up on a feeling of being lost amid the corporate routes, smelling the minute is our only retreat.
The world gets smaller. Great write.
Love the topic of this one. I’m trying to buy American but I’m quickly finding that it is close to impossible. Anyway, I love how you can express an opinion without drowning the reader in it. Nice write, Claudia.
Oh, the notebooks that travel the world. Loved.
I love the “almost English notes”. So much of our stuff today comes with almost English, almost German, almost Dutch, Danish, Czech (and about 20 other languages) instructions that are probably incomprehensible to everyone.
“no one really knows where they’re produced”
(i have my thoughts though)
this made me smirk… yes, dirty mind!
love your poem, Claudia… you’re so skilled with words, I think you could see me anything – from little notebooks to washer and dryer (meaning: love your poetry!).
Oh, man. This is the best introductory line ever. Now I can’t wait to read the rest of the poem: “‘i just think this is a little weird’, i say,”
This is my favorite section:
“that’s where the little notebooks come from
with the almost-english quotes, charming
and uNEdited, you ship me some,
& i’ll spin verse, limpid, fragile wordFalls,
centerweigh the globe, lightweight, lying
on a meadow among daisies & a herd of
brindled cows”
It’s always a pleasure, Claudia.
Oh to travel around this crazy sphere, to dream even when we see a country name printed upon a notebook or any other object…and to prepare journeys tracing the path around an illuminated globe…
Beautiful, Claudia
“& i’ll spin verse, limpid, fragile wordFalls,
centerweigh the globe, lightweight, lying
on a meadow among daisies & a herd of
brindled cows”
…something so lovely about these lines… something we can all connect to as humans on this globe…now matter where our “stuff” comes from or where we are or may be going.
i like your opening stanza, Claudia. good question! more smiles.
I like this globe finger trotting poem very much
I want to write a travelogue in one
really dug the line “can you smell the night?” I love the scent of fresh air.. and there is something about the air at night htat just takes you off somewhere.. like this poem… took me to many places, I enjoyed it very much!
Your first stanza got me hooked! I lovedyour wordfalls, but puzzle about the serendipity capital letters.
I love how you weave this together, but I do hope you wiped your greasy fingerprints off the Indian Ocean…
A wonderful marriage of fun and meaning here…this is not new with you…just a different venue…and yes, indeed, the world shrinks..yet we seem to oddly shrink rather than grow..or are we? Great write!
So funny, Claudia. This past week I was in Los Angeles, looking through items at museum stores. With the exception of artisan pieces, the whole lot was made in China. I felt a little sad about that.
“Can you smell the night?” <- amazing line
“white sand beaches—i’m dreaming,
and leave greasy fingerprints
on the Indian Ocean, “really, i’m emotionless”, i say,” Such a brilliant interplay of the whimsical and the mundane with these lines as well as throughout the entire piece. And yes, I can smell the night. Love this.
I love this playful repertoire, how you’ve converted your conversation into a dance of images and whitty anecdotes
…emotionless is Germany (as opposed to Sleepless in Seattle)
very fun..
I think you could write a hundred poems under that title – it’s absolutely brilliant.
Oh I’ve missed your light in my life as I’ve taken a few little holiday travels to nowhere but somewhere on a ship in the sea, my grandchildren with me. What fun!
Glad to be back writing and reading again, but it may be spotty for a while. Still in the process of moving back to the Dallas area and trying to sell the beach house.
It’s a very small, huge world…. love the ways this moves. = )
A unique perspective into the Mercator Projection that is the geography of our lives, intertwining latitude and longitude, motion and stillness, imbuing the here and now with emotion.
I love poems that spring from conversations! They’ve got a lot of character!
but no matter where they are produced, someone is selling it on ebay, if comes from China, Japan or Germany, you have to ask if it REALLY came from there
{ just beware, they don’t really protect the buyer.}
the world is such an amazing place now with all of the connections from commerce to the internet to poetry to instant communication and on and on. i love when you write a poem with the word play and visual elements! when are you going to do another video reading?
♥
Always love the way you weave a poem story and I love this one
nice. Claudia, love the parentheses and the quotes, masterfully done, and really like the second stanza a lot, very cool. Thanks
…i can always smell the night…. painfully sweeter at its darkest hour…. i like a lot the references to some asian places Claudia…. i wonder if you’ve ever been to any countries in asia? smiles…
Ah, the world in the palm of the hand … wonderful write, Claudia
Most electronics seem to be assembled in China nowadays. I don’t think things go through Japan much anymore but I don’t know. Agree with the idea about backpacking in Vietnam after Chinese New Year, it’s a beautiful country. Reading this is indeed like overhearing a conversation in the office. Much fun.
I never know wot to say with yr writes as I enjoy them so much, so Ill just sit here quietly and enjoy
I second the above comment…..
Hey C. I had to scroll the nob on my mouse 17 times to get to this comment box and now I forgot why I am here. Probably to say that I loved your poem and its sensory perception or odd angles of thought or something. Cheers!
capturing the zeitgeist in this one… really is of the times… the new economic world order is happening how… America is sinking very fast and my children will probably be learning Simplified Chinese at school if they want a chance at good jobs
This certainly had a wonderful beat to as read through these words. Love it.
Witty, wacky and wise about our wonky world!
I like the matter of fact tone in this, Claudia. Well written.
Pamela
Enjoyable from the first word to the last, and back again for another read.
How small the world has become, and how well you’ve captured this.
Huh, Japanese notebooks. I thought EVERYthing was made in China.
leaving greasy fingerprints on the Indian Ocean is a nice one!
I like the guernsys. none taken! Offense that is.
xoxo
the idea of leaving greasy finger prints on the Indian Ocean really struck a chord with me Claudia!
I really like this globalization of poetry, who writes poetry often feels a world citizen. Compliments.
The more I read your work the more my imagination is transported. I keep seeing a visual continuity of my art spinning along with the twIST of prOSE you so elegantly weave. What a lovely journey … (still moving) You are inspiring me to write and take CHANCES (lots of small chances too) and not know, where I am going, and what I am doing. (not knowing what I am doing is probably the best I could hope for). So I thank you for this moment of clarity (non~clarity ~ which is good). I think I just wrote a poem. Post it???