>dragon-flight into my heart, pinpoint landing on a
platform, built of black coffee & wet rain. what
you leave when you leave is much more than
charcoal-dusted smells of blazing fires, consuming
treasures, i didn’t know about, getting lost beneath
piled sugar cubes of hopes & dreams.
today i shout crystal-frost into silence & breathe
oxygen-less
what can you say in 55 words? linking up with g-man
>Holy Smokes Claudia…You sure ran the gamut of descriptive brilliance here…Fantastic 55 My Friend.Thanks for playing, thanks for your well wishes, and have a Kick Ass Week-End….G
>Very intriguing. I'm not sure what it all means tho. But as G-man says…your words are descriptive!!Here's mineHope you can find time to visit.Happy FridayHappy weekend.
>you know i feel pain…and msybe i just read myself into it…but ashes can be traded for beauty…and oxygen breathed a new…
>Brilliant!And my words shatter in that frost
>Lov what you scribed here! and the images are wonderful thanks.
>"I shout crystal frost into silence." I'm still contemplating this.
>Wow, so vivid! My fav, "Sugar cubes of hopes and dreams"
>I love this. I must come back and read again, but as always your words speak beyond the rational. They are words of contemplation of life and heart.
>Wonderful feel to your 55, Claudia!
>Black coffee and wet rain. That's awesome.
>Deep feelings in this 55.My 55 is HERE .
>smart 55.keep smiling.Happy Friday.
>Like Mama Zen, the line "pinpoint landing on a/platform, built of black coffee & wet rain…" really hooked me. Lavish description and bright bright images one after the other make this an exceptionally chewy 55. Great work.
>I love the imagery of black coffee and rain.Mine is here
>As others have mentioned, I love the black coffee and rain line as well. Your imagery is always so bold and fantastic! Great 55!
>wow this is s volcanic burst!lovely!
>That took my breath away and made me thirsty. Gee Claudia…I love how your mind works.
>Too good!who hid that story for us to find
>This I believe only YOU can say…
>I love the imagery especially the "piled sugar cubes of hopes and dreams" (the sweetest kind).Wonderful 55, Claudia.
>Left with something important missing – oxygen-less. Very nice!
>Excellent 55 Claudia. I love the flow of words to match.
>Love the imagery – powerful words my dear – each phrase is a sculpted masterpieceMoonie Hugs